Right... well this was... uh-uh. So firstly, game or not the second one, Shotgun Massacre? That was just disgusting. There is zero context, in fantasy or real life, that makes that okay. You came up with three original stories, why couldn't you do that for Shotgun Massacre? We could have been at a mall, or a park or SOMETHING.
And second, no offence intended, but you really need a native English speaker to go over your text. Some parts were just painful to read and down right confusing. Very first example that comes to mind is when you first meet John (How it's supposed to be spelled, by the way). The in-game text is "Good night Thomas, My name is Jhon Rubrick and I came here to bring the world of God to you."
While that is... fine, it could use a bit of refinement. That sentence should read as: "Evening, Thomas. My name is John Ruberick, and I'm here to bring you the word of God."
So yeah... A fine game for the price, but the English needs a LOT of work and the mock Columbine Shooting was just disgusting and in really poor taste.
Dernier jeu de ce Volume 1. Je pense que c'est celui où j'ai eu le plus de mal mais je l'ai beaucoup aimé tout de même, jamais déçue :) // Last game in Volume 1. I think this is the one I had the most trouble with, but I really enjoyed it all the same, never disappointed :)
Mon jeu préféré des 4 ! Il m'a bien fait galérer mais il était vraiment super et vraiment drôle c: // My favourite game of the 4! I had a hard time with it but it was really great and really funny:
J'ai beaucoup aimé le premier jeu, comme d'habitude, jamais déçue de 616 games // I really liked the first game, as usual, never disappointed with 616 games!
Not what I was expecting from 616. What was the point of the second game? It wasn't for revenge, you can't be the hero. It was just insensitive and in poor taste. And it's dressed up as, "just a game." Like that makes it ok. It shouldn't have been tied to that event. I can deal with most dark topics but that wasn't it. The other games felt dull. Yeah you usually have to let the scenes play out with 616 games, but there's usually some comedy element or something to distract you from the wait.
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Right... well this was... uh-uh. So firstly, game or not the second one, Shotgun Massacre? That was just disgusting. There is zero context, in fantasy or real life, that makes that okay. You came up with three original stories, why couldn't you do that for Shotgun Massacre? We could have been at a mall, or a park or SOMETHING.
And second, no offence intended, but you really need a native English speaker to go over your text. Some parts were just painful to read and down right confusing. Very first example that comes to mind is when you first meet John (How it's supposed to be spelled, by the way). The in-game text is "Good night Thomas, My name is Jhon Rubrick and I came here to bring the world of God to you."
While that is... fine, it could use a bit of refinement. That sentence should read as: "Evening, Thomas. My name is John Ruberick, and I'm here to bring you the word of God."
So yeah... A fine game for the price, but the English needs a LOT of work and the mock Columbine Shooting was just disgusting and in really poor taste.
An anthology like horror game is something we need more of in gaming.
Dernier jeu de ce Volume 1. Je pense que c'est celui où j'ai eu le plus de mal mais je l'ai beaucoup aimé tout de même, jamais déçue :) // Last game in Volume 1. I think this is the one I had the most trouble with, but I really enjoyed it all the same, never disappointed :)
Mon jeu préféré des 4 ! Il m'a bien fait galérer mais il était vraiment super et vraiment drôle c: // My favourite game of the 4! I had a hard time with it but it was really great and really funny:
J'ai beaucoup aimé le premier jeu, comme d'habitude, jamais déçue de 616 games // I really liked the first game, as usual, never disappointed with 616 games!
Not what I was expecting from 616. What was the point of the second game? It wasn't for revenge, you can't be the hero. It was just insensitive and in poor taste. And it's dressed up as, "just a game." Like that makes it ok. It shouldn't have been tied to that event. I can deal with most dark topics but that wasn't it. The other games felt dull. Yeah you usually have to let the scenes play out with 616 games, but there's usually some comedy element or something to distract you from the wait.